So I finished my latest conlang translation effort. It's an exhortation piece written in the very early days of the Salanjan Imperium. I've put glosses for each paragraph in spoiler tags at the bottom. Comments, suggestions, corrections (I'm sure I mucked up somewhere in the glossing just out of constant re-editing) are welcome!

Snide remarks as well, I suppose, as long as you read the whole thing at least? Please