Off and on I have been working on revising (and adding to) my grammar of Jamna Kopiai. The
original is here. I'm well aware the original suffers from serious readability problems: large walls of text; a dearth of examples; a syntactic transformation notation that was intended to be simple and illustrative but quickly ballooned out of control.
Beyond these generalities, I am asking for specific suggestions on which parts of the grammar need to be re-written or re-structured. What parts are too big a wall of text? Where have I been too jargony for easy comprehension? Where have I droned on to a degree that becomes uninstructive? What things are confusing or poorly explained? Where are the worst problems in how the information is organized? Et cetera.
Any and all suggestions are appreciated.