What does your neck o'th' wood's English (or your native language other than English) sound like? You can post your recording of the Stella text (in English or in translation) here. Why the Stella text? Isn't that unnatural because you're not speaking normally? Yeah, I guess. On the other hand, in order to compare, it makes sense to have some yardstick.

Please call Stella! Ask her to bring these things with her from the store: six spoons of fresh snow peas, five thick slabs of blue cheese, and maybe a snack for her brother Bob. We also need a small plastic snake and a big toy frog for the kids. She can scoop these things into three red bags and we will go meet her Wednesday at the train station.