quoting Rhetorica:

Are you still looking for help with this? Anything in particular?

Any comments would be appreciated - opinions on what I've got, pointing out anything I've missed, layout, spelling mistakes, whatever .  However, there is a new draft! 

Some areas of concern:

The phonemic values of the vowels were thrown together quickly and I wouldn't mind completely overhauling them
Should I add a phonemic transcription to the glosses?
"Common grammatical prefixes" is a shitty name for that section
Not entirely happy with my negation strategies
Need to sort out table formatting/page break placement/other prettifying stuff
Stupid unhelpful prefix lists are stupid and unhelpful
Need ideas for a suitably dorfy number system