Dwarf Fortress is an insane, perpetually alpha roguelike/adventure/construction/short bearded psychopath simulator game that some of you may have heard of.  It features a* simple naming language that allows you to randomly generate or construct such names as Bomrek Stettad "The Whips of Taxing", Vúshatîs "Hotstakes", and of course Koganusân "Boatmurdered".

Obviously a simple naming language is Not Good Enough, so I made improvements.  Initially I had a look at the language as it was to try and get some idea of the phonology.  Then I accidentally a grammar (still roughly in places and poorly formatted, but relatively complete and including a Babel Text).

Help me tidy up and finish off this shit so I can go back to doing real conlanging.

*Actually four (Dwarf, Elf, Human and Goblin), but they are all relexes of each other.

I salute you.

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Are you still looking for help with this? Anything in particular?

quoting Rhetorica:

Are you still looking for help with this? Anything in particular?

Any comments would be appreciated - opinions on what I've got, pointing out anything I've missed, layout, spelling mistakes, whatever .  However, there is a new draft! 

Some areas of concern:

The phonemic values of the vowels were thrown together quickly and I wouldn't mind completely overhauling them
Should I add a phonemic transcription to the glosses?
"Common grammatical prefixes" is a shitty name for that section
Not entirely happy with my negation strategies
Need to sort out table formatting/page break placement/other prettifying stuff
Stupid unhelpful prefix lists are stupid and unhelpful
Need ideas for a suitably dorfy number system

quoting Anguipes:

However, there is a new draft!

This really didn't get the attention it deserved when it appeared. (Stupid summer workload.) If I'm not mistaken this was a huge improvement over the first draft you put out, though in four months I don't remember it too well. I love the phonetic texture you produced; it's very consistent with the original roots inventory and does a good job of respecting the Tolkien influences secretly powering everything.

For numbers, I might recommend something that speaks to dorfish engineering and the love of geometry—something deeply practical with irregular-but-convenient bases like the Imperial measurement system. ... Of course, you've been gone for like a month, so who knows if you'll ever see this!

eh she recently surfaced from the brackish waters of IRC so she will probably

Yes. Crossing fingers on that one.

Her Internets were broke and all the king's horses and all the king's men couldn't put them back together again.

Then they got better.

Here's hoping! She's still not been back on here, though. We'll need to lure her the next time she's around.