So I finished my latest conlang translation effort. It's an exhortation piece written in the very early days of the Salanjan Imperium. I've put glosses for each paragraph in spoiler tags at the bottom. Comments, suggestions, corrections (I'm sure I mucked up somewhere in the glossing just out of constant re-editing) are welcome!

Snide remarks as well, I suppose, as long as you read the whole thing at least? Please

One suggestion: use [g ] to place the gloss alongside your text within the spoiler tags, ras currently I can only keep track of where your gloss is within your text is when there are obvious names therein.

I realized something...are you scrolling up to the top and then back down to the glosses? Because I put each paragraph right above its glossing at the bottom.

No. I am reading the paragraph alongside its gloss right below it. I am just commenting that that'd be easier to read if each word in the text were above its gloss, rather than just each paragraph.